The Constellations Between Your Freckles

February 9, 2024

The Constellations Between Your Freckles

I hope I get the time,

To name the constellations

I draw between your freckles.

I hope I get to hear you sing again,

So that sound of your voice

Which could make angels sin

Echos between my thoughts.

I hope I get to kiss away,

At every inch of every scar,

Every inch of every insecurity.

I hope one day you feel

As beautiful as I see you

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Rowan

I am a man of words, and preferably those words left unspoken

19 responses to “The Constellations Between Your Freckles”

cazzycoop

February 9, 2024 at 12:00 pm

Beautiful and cute

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1. Jacob Rowan
  
  February 9, 2024 at 7:02 pm
  
  Thanks, it’s kinda cheesy, but whatever it’s good to be vulnerable.
  
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  1. Anonymous
    
    February 11, 2024 at 12:56 pm
    
    Cheesy maybe, but we need cheesy and I love it. To hear a voice “Which could make angels sin” now that’s got me wondering. Thanks!
    
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  2. Jacob Rowan
    
    February 12, 2024 at 9:21 am
    
    Exactly! thank you
    
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Ana Daksina

February 9, 2024 at 3:32 pm

Absolutely immersive! Enchanting.

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1. Jacob Rowan
  
  February 9, 2024 at 7:01 pm
  
  Thank you!
  
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surrealartpsychonaut

February 9, 2024 at 10:38 pm

There are some wonderful lines in this poem. It sounds more original to me than a lot of the poetry I’ve read on WordPress. If you have another look at it in a few weeks, or a few months time, I believe you will be able to make some minor improvements to it though.

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LuAnne Holder

February 10, 2024 at 5:15 pm

What a beautiful love poem.

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1. Jacob Rowan
  
  February 11, 2024 at 10:12 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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Anonymous

February 11, 2024 at 7:45 pm

your entro (I like it with an e) is neat. It kinda drags on and asks no one like me to the conversation, even if it likes corporatist with fast cars who hit me with puddles while I wait for the bus, but I like it. The intro not puddles, the bus or corporatist. 😉👍

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1. Jacob Rowan
  
  February 12, 2024 at 9:21 am
  
  Thank you, it was a fun time writing it
  
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pk 🌎

February 19, 2024 at 12:07 pm

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csincere

February 19, 2024 at 12:54 pm

👍👍

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r.Douglas

February 24, 2024 at 9:51 am

skills …you got skills

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1. Jacob Rowan
  
  February 24, 2024 at 9:57 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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Anonymous

February 25, 2024 at 2:16 pm

I absolutely love those first three lines! Bravo! There’s a lot of depth to be explored in the idea of constellations and what they carry.

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1. Jacob Rowan
  
  February 26, 2024 at 8:17 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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Anonymous

August 14, 2025 at 12:47 am

Reading you gave me back my breath, Poet!

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1. Rowan
  
  September 1, 2025 at 7:12 pm
  
  😉 I’m glad
  
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